I rang his number
At 10:24 on Tuesday night
The deafening silence
That answered
Brought me to
My knees
A certainty that it was
Something I said
Began to overflow
And the tears burned
Like a caustic rain
Washing away
All but the ghost
Of me
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Wow! and wonderful, so good! I need more.....
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Thanks so much! A moody piece 'twas :)
I liked it. Upvoted 😊
Thank you! Much appreciated :)
Still making such heart wrenching poetry! Love it, keep it up!
Thank you kindly! :)
Lovely
Thank you so much :)
Sigue lloviendo en el corazon
Siempre lloviendo, es cierto... gracias :)
Hi Tina, how are you? I want to tell you that I managed to bring my two babies dogs with me, finally! And I want to thank you for your support when I needed it. I send you a hug ❤ and I leave the happy ending in case you want to look :)
https://steemit.com/animals/@yiyi.maiola/i-m-back-with-the-best-story-ever-photos-videos
What wonderful news!! I'm so happy for you!! <3
This poem packed a punch. Love your short but sweetness. You really hit home!
Thank you dear. I've been moody as of late, lol. Creative release. xo
I loved the simplicity of the poem, yet it is very emotional.
Thank you so much! :)
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Thank you :)
Just saw this post, Tina - too late for the other one. This poem is getting more into your tone of voice - that's what gives it bite. Funny, I just wrote about ghosts tonight - we're forever in anticipation or recollection and it raises such spectres
Hi John, and thanks! Sorry for the late reply. Yes, you hit the nail on the head... always remembering or yearning...
rings your number then remembers he dosnt really like talking on the phone hehe walks over with wine
haha! Wine makes everything all better :D Thanks my friend!
sure does a toast 🍷🍷 to the hungry foodies of steemit
Good post tina .and i want to speak you in spical
Thanks!
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you're making steemit a great community with your content tinajordan! keep it up!
Thank you!