Terry's Poetry Tryings. Simple rhymes.

in #poetry7 years ago



The sky is blue,

The grass is green.

The only truth!

But, is it real?


This one is bad!

This one - a saint!

Our world is mad -

Need to repaint!


Stereotypes

And separation!

B & W stripes...

Our damnation!


Life - colorful,

For each - its own!

World - unique,

Every stone!


Try to judge less

And more to give!

Easy access -

Live and let live...



Sincerely, Terry Craft.


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Very cool Terry!! Love all the different stuff in the poem! Live and let live!

Its realy truth sky blue live and let live very nice words and totlay amazing i like it.

I love this! You write good poems

Thank a lot ^ ^

@terrycraft - Very simple and very touching. I especially liked this one

Life - colorful,
For each - its own!
World - unique,
Every stone!

Kind of goes with my free spirit thoughts that I have been writing about lately!

Thanks for sharing. Upvoted full.

Regards,

@vm2904

very very fantastic poetry..💕

GREAT POETRY, WOW! MIND BLOWN, HOW TALENTED YOU ARE!!!

Haha nice one. I really liked it.

trying to live without regret we are what we are live, love and forgive more , you inspire me today , beautiful simple poem. thanks a lot

Thank you, for kind words! :)

It's been a long day, so I appreciate the colors and cute pics in your poem. Now I should translate all of this into Japanese! Lol

You're welcome! ^ ^

Nice poem to begin a beautiful day. Good job terrycraft!

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This was quit enjoyable, Thank you for sharing. I really like to write myself it can be quite enjoyable and stress relieving. When it comes together its a nice accomplishment. I will have to follow so I can check out your work more.

great to post...

short and thought filled poem, so very good, my friend

wow nice post...

Wow! Friend you have written a very meaningful poem, I think you wrote it in Russian style, very impressive one specialy,our world is mad, need to repaint. Thanks for sharing, hope you are doing great friend,have an wonderful time.

Hi! ^ ^

Yes, I constantly think that my "poetry" is too Russian! lol :)

Amazing poetry!

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How simple and very effective , Poetry gets rewarded , that is the beauty of the rhymes :)

Goo poery

Simple but full of meaning!

I feel this could be a transition poem of sorts for kids. Nice one @terrycraft

Nice and simple, but conveys a clear picture. Well done!

I'm giving you a follow to read more, and if you'd like to see some of my stuff from my own personal challenge to write 100 Poems in 30 Days, give me a follow back and peruse my posts!

Touching .... I am reading it for the fourth time. Its amazing

Nice, I will also post some poetry soon. I like the format and the images. thanks for sharing.

bwaaah! yeah man!

Nice one!

this poem was so sweet it meant so much it made me think of my boyfriend and couragre me to write a poem about him thank you for a wonderful poem to read this really terffic.

I like any poet-themed theme, if you can make it with a better masterpiece so that those who read understand the intent of the contents of the poem, do not forget to make friends, follow me, maybe we can share opinions

wow its too gd