Intermittent supervision in the dark,
that in your life you will never achieve,
since you will never lower your guard,
because my shadow will accompany you.
In your mind the hours diverge,
so much that the days become nights,
that you would try to find peace,
on the gentle slopes of the mountains.
By Leonardo Blanco (@tcpaikano)
good work! the things brief and good are double good
great words, yes we can't do anything if we don't battle and lower our guards.
Am I reading a biblical allusion into this one? .. I shall fear no evil? .. I'm comforted. Your poems always strike a chord, Sir.
A very well written piece of work
Really enjoy these smooth & deep lines...
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Nice one
Nice poem !
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