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RE: Poem / Take time to smell the flowers!

in #poetry8 years ago

Nice read. I can clearly tell that there is a weight to your words and it seems as if that weight is being carried. All I can say though is emotion is what makes these words as strong as they are and even when you try to turn those off it almost seems impossible. But that is definitely not a bad thing.

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Yeah it is weighted but after writing this I'm feeling much better.