Poem of the week
Title: fake friends
No matter how you give them the best
They still go out there to meet the rest
And start getting complicated interest
They always want you to fail the test
This friends are just like a shadow
When you are in stardom they do follow
But when you get into darkness they Unfollow
They are those in white jacket
But inside are like black pot
And showing love to you alot
And when you are gone they backbite like a slot
They form and pretend just to be with you
Hiding their normal attitude
Showing out their fake attitude
I call them friendless friends
Because they are lifeless
My dear friends stay away from them
They are always around you all the time
Just for them to no the next action of the line
They love seeing you all the time
Not for good intentions but for bad
They show love in the public
And make jest at you at the backyard
NOTE:
Pls kindly watch who you share life with because most of them are enemy of progress, just play safe and you will finally overcome them.
Pls kindly upvote and comment if you love this truthful lesson.
By: @softboy112
Wow, reality really sucks sometimes. As what they say, tell me who your friends are and I tell you who you are that's why chose wisely your friends. Choose those who will make you come to greatness not to the worst, really.
@all good one there.
Your boy dey here too oo.
Make we follow help each other.
Its @bandisandi
Done bro
Fake friends everywhere.
Thanks @softboy112 for this wonderful piece. I just followed and upvoted your post.
Good One my Naija Brother
Thanks bro, i will follow back.
I saw you don’t have a Steemit Profile Picture I made a story post to make it simply to do. https://steemit.com/steemit/@isteemithard/how-to-upload-a-profile-picture-and-or-cover-image-to-your-steemit-account
I think you could improve some of the words you're rhyming so they flow better. Think of where the emphasis is on how you pronounce the words - this affects how naturally your poem will rhyme and stops readers having to say words unnaturally. E.g. The word interest - the emphasis is naturally on INterest. But in your poem, for he rhyme to work you must read it as interEST.
Anyway this was a nice poem and is so very true. Worth an upvote, hope you don't mind my constructive criticism!
Thanks
friend will became enemy but sometime enemy will be a friend. this is life...
Exactly bro
I will not call you My Friend ;)
Lol
I saw you don’t have a Steemit Profile Picture I made a story post to make it simply to do. https://steemit.com/steemit/@isteemithard/how-to-upload-a-profile-picture-and-or-cover-image-to-your-steemit-account
I saw you don’t have a Steemit Profile Picture I made a story post to make it simply to do. https://steemit.com/steemit/@isteemithard/how-to-upload-a-profile-picture-and-or-cover-image-to-your-steemit-account
Here is a post for Nigeria. https://steemit.com/nigeria/@isteemithard/nigerians-joining-steemit-at-amazing-rate
Nice, its hard truth...dont think too much!!! :)
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