You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Empty Like Air (A Poem)View the full contextView the direct parentriovanes (66)in #poetry • 6 years ago Well, the theme of the poem is about empty and broken promises, so I decided to end it like that.
I really like it, maybe one more hopefull line :)
Best.
I like it as is.Heartfelt and honest.
The power for positive influence is in the emotional effect. Not by inciting wishful imagination.
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