Morning Chorus - Photography/Poetry Collaboration by @raj808 & @soyrosa

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Introduction - The Resonance of Images

This is the second part of a collaboration between myself and @soyrosa. In the first part Rosa supplied a series of pictures and I wrote a poem inspired by the images in the pictures. This was a very productive process for me as a story flowed naturally from those pictures. To read the poem from part one and more about how it was inspired please check out the first of my posts in this series The Dereliction of Time - Poetry/Photography Collaboration. To flip to the other side of the coin, the collaboration from Rosa's perspective, please check out her post Art collaboration: Photography by @soyrosa & Poetry by @raj808.

The thing that I have realized throughout this process, is that there is definitely a resonance between the way that a poet and photographer view images. Whether it be accentuating the underlying feel of a place through light/perspective in photography or finding a way to elevate the sense of a subject past its basic function through metaphor. In both poetry and photography you are essentially trying to find hidden layers that will tell a story beyond what appears at the surface.

Morning Chorus - A Brief Commentary

I wrote this poem over 10 years ago. It was considered for the Liverpool John Moores university literary anthology, but ended up being passed up in favor of a different poem of mine that they published. After a brief edit and re-write, I decided that this could be an interesting choice as there are elements to the verses that use different literary device than imagery.

Morning Chorus is an ancient Arabic form of poetry called Ghazal which repeats words at the end of each stanza. I wanted to give Rosa a poem that was less visual than many of my other poems to limit my influence through prompt. This poem describes things in a more olfactory way, using smells and sound as cues more than imagery. However, there are two main strongly contrasting images as a literary device and I was interested to see how this would translate into photography.

@soyrosa's choice of photography was both apt and interesting. She hit on the central poetic device that tells the story through the two contrasting mornings that are being experienced. This poem is driven forward by the sounds that wake the two narrators and the juxtaposition between the ringing bells vs weapon fire.

Just as the poetry in the first collaboration built a story that complimented what was already present in the pictures, here the pictures underline the core of the narrative. The black and white adds a solemnity that lends itself to the subject matter, further highlighting the bleak theme of the poem. The progression of images also follows the narrative; the bell and then the bell tolling. This lends a finality to the verses in the second panel, increasing the impact of the poem.

When I first wrote this poem, the religious symbolism of bells were meant as a core part of the subtext, highlighting my view that religion has been the 'alarming' cause of the majority of war and human suffering throughout history. I'm not sure if Rosa picked up on this, choosing cathedral bells for this reason but the choice does highlight the resonance of images that I spoke about earlier. This resonance is clear, whether it be conscious or subconscious. I feel this connection between poetic images and the photographers perspective flows naturally from the way that the two creative artists view the world.

It is this realization that I see as my greatest success of this collaboration. I am now considering trying to learn a higher level of photography and am definitely going to pursue more collaborations with photographers as the two disciplines are so complimentary.

I would like to say a massive thank you to @soyrosa for sharing her time and photography in this collaboration and I urge you to check out her complimentary post, published soon. Hopefully, we can do something similar at steemfest 3 if there is time between presentations, day-tripping and crazy Krakow drinking.

All photos are the property © of @soyrosa, used with her permission and poetry is property © of me, Rowan Joyce. If you have enjoyed reading this creative #collaboration, you can check out similar work on my homepage @raj808. Thank you.

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Thank YOU for inviting me on this art adventure, and you write such amazing things it makes me blush! I always wished I was a better writer but this collab made me see how working together can be just as fulfilling. Thanks for that experience, it's honestly something I'm not really good at, always wanting to be in full control. It was a great learning experience with in my eyes very very lovely outcomes!

ha ha, as to the writing... it is what I've been working toward doing for a career all my life since I was around 14. I kind of had a flash back to my university days and that's where all that poetic analysis came from ;-)

It was a great learning experience with in my eyes very very lovely outcomes!

I agree it was a great collaboration and learning experience from my side too. And the finished piece that we produced together so much more than the sum of each part. Thanks for agreeing to this with the tight time constraints and my lame-ness in being able (or not in this case) to keep to my sndbox deadlines ;-)

Quite a combination there of the church bells and your poetry. That is so true that religion often is the cause of war since the crusades. The combination of the photography and your words makes one ponder where we are right now in this time and age.

Yeah... it is a question that could be considered quite divisive, but I suspect mainly by religious people.

I'm pretty confident in stating that opinion as fact myself. Or rather I feel it's mans ability to use politics to pervert the tenants of religion into dogma that has caused so much bloodshed and suffering. Deep at the root of most religions are the same tenants of love, understanding and patience. It's the succession of schisms through political maneuvering that have created the divides all the way back to biblical times.

your words makes one ponder where we are right now in this time and age.

Yeah... me too. I don't think we have developed all that much in that it's still politics (in one form or another) that keeps all schisms relevant. I am aware that is a very simplistic (broad) analysis but it is how I see it. I used to think a lot about these issues when I was younger, until I realized it was just making me depressed lol

Thanks for your thoughtful and insightful comment @watersnake101

What a great idea, you guys! @soyrosa - both of your posts are excellent. It's so good to see more people combining images and creative writing.

Thanks viking-ventures.

I think creative collaborations like this are really great for both the artists involved but also for steem in general as it shows what can be achieved through community.

Also, It is 100% more fulfilling and worthwhile to work from prompts like Rosa's fantastic pictures than writing a poem and then trying to find random pics from pixabay to try and compliment the poem.

I love the morning chorus

Thanks dude, glad you enjoyed.

What a great collaboration! Two such talented people!! Looking forward to seeing what you are going to brew up at Steemfest!

Hi @mariannewest. Thanks for checking out the collab post :-)

Yeah, I can't wait to see what Krakow is like in general; the conferance, the city and the archetecture and art... & with all that material for inspiration it would be foolish not to combine forces again :-)

For sure!! And you are going to see each other in person and possibly look at the same event/structure you will interpret in your individual art form. So cool!

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I loved the rhythm in the poem, full of energy :)

Thanks hazem I'm glad the poem spoke to you. And you noticed the rhythm of the Ghazal. I still remember writing it, even though it was more than 10 years ago and then I was trying to make sure it had a strong rhythmic feel to fit in with all the auditory descriptions. When I edited/re-wrote it yesterday before publishing this version I tried to tweak the rhythm a bit and its great to hear that it hasn't gone noticed.

Thanks for reading as well as your vote and comment :-)

Love the photos and the words that accompanies them.

Thanks roselifecoach. I'm glad you enjoyed the post :-)

i love your article, very beautiful presentation. God bless your work.
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Wishing you a ghoulish Hallowe'en. Hope you get lots of treats tonight!
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Really glad you enjoyed it 🙂

It's a quiet Halloween for me tonight lol I treated myself to ice-cream 😉

Happy Halloween @ykdesign