All That Is Gold Does Not Glitter,
Not All Those Who Wander Are Lost
-Tolkien
She Changed (Poem)
Raging hardhearted frozen difficulties,
Highs and lows, manic sensibilities.
Lashing out without rhyme or reason,
Miserable pain no matter the season.
Taking a beating without just cause,
Confusing my mind, causing a pause.
What changed you to such pure hate?
Search for a charm to grant you abate.
Why make things what they are not?
Stop marching like a juggernaut.
Forget your overworked vanity,
To maintain a fragile sanity.
The emotion engraved in this piece is so real and so deep. Your words are heavy conveying the painful memories of divorce.
I just hope you'll find an answer to this question.
Thanks for so great a piece. Keep writing
Thank you so much for taking the time to read the poem and comment. I appreciate your support!
The emotions in the poem are so real, that i feel your pains and how much you missed her former self when you said "Confusing my Mind". hope you look at her once more from a different point of view.
Thank you for the compliment and support!
I love the way this rolls off the tongue, it's got effortless rhythm. People change, but at least we get to write great poetry :) All the best.
Thanks, I appreciate the support and those are my favorite lines of the poem!
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