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RE: A Well Written Poem Called Eden

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

Here I am , seeking you in the garden
What name is it again ? Eden
Here with my brethren
I desire us all become a new being

It was a long and dangerous voyage
Traveled all through the Ice age
The deserts almost turned us into savages
But we survived to the best of our knowledge

Brothers of blood and bones, a sibling of three
Born and raised in the trees
Full of packed sins and atrocities
Here we are ready to be cleansed

Magical... wonderful poem. it inspired this poetic comment.