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RE: Poem / That won't break me

in #poetry7 years ago

I love this line!

That won't break me
You will never get me on my knees
You will never have the power
To take over me not even in my darkest our

But you might wanna change the "our" to "hour" ?
Just thought that you might have meant that. Thanks for sharing. Kinda needed it, that season of life :) Cheers!!

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Thank you :) I will correct it :)