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RE: Raw Poetry

in #poetry7 years ago

Thank you @joseph for sharing dark_horizons poem with us. It is a hauntingly beautiful piece about the darkness of death. The narrator immediately orients the reader within a dream-state. Each stanza builds anticipation as the narrator becomes captivated by the voices. There is foreshadowing of death before the narrator awakes and ultimately takes his own life.

Personally, I focus primarily on performance poetry, but love checking out written works as well.

It'd be great if you could check out my latest post with a brief 2min performance at a local open-mic. Thanks and I'm looking forward to your next post.

https://steemit.com/story/@mkkenny13/express-yourself