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RE: POETRY | Best Laid Plans

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

Thank you @naquoya for poetry that eats at my heart. Plans are laid and we wait for return.

These words stand out the most:

The blood of martyrs rinsed his soul
Yet he sits
In Silence
As words fall over him like rain

The redemption of reconciliation caused his soul to overflow in words meaning to be returned.

Thank you

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You've provided me with some great feedback now, and I appreciate it. Glad to know this spoke to you, direct to your heart.