In terms of English it is perfect, aside perhaps from "trueman", I'm not sure what that's supposed to mean. You could change it to "a true man" which would be grammatically correct but not idiomatic. "a real man" might be more appropriate but then it might not carry the meaning you intended.
Nice poem :-)
In terms of English it is perfect, aside perhaps from "trueman", I'm not sure what that's supposed to mean. You could change it to "a true man" which would be grammatically correct but not idiomatic. "a real man" might be more appropriate but then it might not carry the meaning you intended.
Thank you! You can't imagine how it's a tremendous thing for me!