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RE: Rise Phoenix Heart - Original Motivational Poem

in #poetry7 years ago

This is a nice concept, well developed.
It reminds me of a short, haiku-like, epigram I wrote some year ago:

Phoenix, Osiris, Jesus,
nell'arco di una sola notte
di nuovo insieme i pezzi.

(Translation from italian:
Phoenix, Osiris, Jesus,
in a single night
the pieces together again.)