Finding Your Path…

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Finding Your Path…

It sounds so romantic
like a walk in the park
a stroll
under the stars
on the way
to your destiny

searching for greatness
that thing.., that
is you
challenging the fate
that effortlessly
awaits

it's not quite as easy
as they make it all sound
not as
straight forward
when you're looking
to be found

chasing your dreams
requires falling
on your face
understanding in time
you're not
running a race

the story
that's unfolding
can be read
or written
the choices you make
not always a given

the infinite possibilities
dancing in your head
all those
unmade choices
connected
by a thread

existing in a world
of the
still unknown
anxiously waiting
to step out
on their own

denying the risk
of exploring
new joys
begging for silence
but met
with more noise

ignoring the consequences
what's left
in the aftermath
is all just
part of

finding your path…



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love to read it .........

CHEERS!

welcome!!!!

in all the struggles in between i am finding my path :D
nice poem thanks for sharing

All the struggles are just part a part of it... :))

i loved reading this poem very nice work

There is so much truth here.
You've touched on the whole range of existence from the important thread of connection to begging for silence.

Thanks @merej99 -- all just part of the journey... :))

wonderfull so so awesome poem and i also like it very much @macksby

Thanks @shencoin.., always love to read your very generous comments... ))

whats a great poem i appriciate you for this great words and i agree on all the words

Thanks @robrowe.., glad you liked it!

its too birlliant to read this poem and hope every one understand and think on it after read this poem

Great comment.., and much appreciated. Thanks for your insight @kellyrose!

Very romantic poetry with lot of emotions.

Thank you...

Der Weg ist das Ziel!

You got that right!!!

Thought so :)

This is a gem!
Such a powerful message made with only some letters and rows..hehe.

Thanks for sharing with us! Keep on doing what you love!

Thanks @spellmaker.., appreciate it!

Nice poem, thanks for sharing (Y)