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RE: Packed Days | NaPoWriMo Day 22

in #poetry7 years ago

Nice write! I like the central metaphor and think you carried it through to the end very satisfyingly :)

and master the art
of retrieving contents
without them causing an explosion.

Great comparison - I think we've all had days where everything seems to be on the verge of falling to pieces...

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Thank you! I'm so glad it came through. Yes, so many days seem to be feeling like that of late, and yet it still doesn't feel like enough!