This honestly very good! Reminds me a little of one of my favourite poems, 'Lost and Found' by Maxine Chernoff, although yours takes a much more realist approach. You write so consistently, its almost a shame NaPoWriMo is over - hope we won't have to wait too long for new poems :)
Maybe you could try one of the poetry competitions here on steemit? They can be a great way to attract new readers, if that's what you're after!
Thank you so much! Yeah, I actually started writing something else and then found this poem when I went downstairs in the middle of the night to get some food from the fridge, haha!
Yeah, it was great writing everyday, but I needed a break. It's not at all easy! But I intend on getting back to it. The great thing about NaPoWriMo was that I posted it regardless of what I thought of it. Otherwise I don't always post.
Competitions sound good! I've only come across a couple, but will lookout for more. Thanks again for stopping by and for sticking through most of the journey!