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RE: Shredding knives- cutting away the excess- Collaborative poetry! <3

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

We tend to fly so high
High above, reaching for our dreams
Dreams of richness, love and great health

I can see it!
I can reach it!
I'm almost there!

We tend to fall so deep
We hit the ground so hard,
so hard
Will we ever wake up again?

What I meant to say was that I loved your poem and that it gave me some inspiration :-)

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You are, and have always been an inspiration to me lovely Kerlund. <3

I trust things are well and good on your side of the pond.

Much love. <3