Oh, I love the sentence
Silence spreads
like rust climbing
the anchor chain.
A kind of awkward feeling being described vividly.
I also love the first stanza: slices the night in two...you cut me-unfolding.
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Thanks kaixin.
I'm glad you enjoyed the imagery in this poem 🙂
It is all about that awkward, painful... almost bitter feeling after a relationship ends.
Not an easy poem to write, but a good one (I think 😂) for conveying that type of emotionally fraught life event.