A beautiful poem written by LunasChild8. A form of writing that will cast a spell on you.
LunasChild8 has many poems she has published on the website down below and I haven't came across one that didn't tickle my brain.
Her form of writing and ability to let people really tap into her mind and soul is not only beautiful, but also majestic. I have copied and pasted her poem, but if you click on the link to her page you'll see that she has also attached a video with a very soothing reading of her poem.
Her poem is called Eden and I know this one you will enjoy. It is nothing less than perfection in its beautiful raw form.
Enjoy.
Eden
Come seek me in the Garden of Eden
Where the crystal-clear water will cleanse you of your sin
Meditate and allow my essence in
Let go of the shadow of a person you have once been.
Come relish in well-deserved homage
Take a bite out of the fruit of knowledge
Kneel and bathe in the divine oil of olive
Rise up from the ashes of those who have fallen.
Close your eyes and surrender yourself to infinity
Be at awe and fearful in the presence of divinity
You and I and the child I carry make up the trinity
Up in this plane there are countless possibilities.
Water, fire, air and earth
Each element held high in mighty worth
One of them inherited at birth
It can either be a blessing or a curse.
Come seek me in the garden of Eden
Your spiritual journey with soon begin
You must pass through the same trials as experienced by your kin
To become the Yang, you must let go of the Yin.
Let love wash over your spirit and heart
Take advantage of this opportunity to restart
I shall await you when your soul departs
With death comes not the end, but a new start.
Poetry have such a great emotions and feelings. Words are perfectly fitted in lines. Worth poetry.
Here I am , seeking you in the garden
What name is it again ? Eden
Here with my brethren
I desire us all become a new being
It was a long and dangerous voyage
Traveled all through the Ice age
The deserts almost turned us into savages
But we survived to the best of our knowledge
Brothers of blood and bones, a sibling of three
Born and raised in the trees
Full of packed sins and atrocities
Here we are ready to be cleansed
Magical... wonderful poem. it inspired this poetic comment.
Poetry is that the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from feeling recollected in tranquility.........Thanks for sharing such a nice poem.......
I really like your cool words. They are polished refind diamonds. How can we appreciate great soul, greater than your precious jems.It feels like you have collected pearl from deep end of the sea and decorated nicely@upvoted and resteemed
Very nice poem.......
wow this is awesome :)
This is really beautiful!!!!!
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This sounds like Shakespeare. The words are just so perfectly chosen. I also love making poems but I am not confident with the words I use because I use mostly like some basic english words :D
I have one poem that I wrote. You can check on that too :) :)
Steady your amazing postings, I see, read and enjoy it thanks for sharing
Hmmmm.... The rhymes and rhythm in each lines and stanzas really help one's imagination about Eden. Well written. Hope to see more of this poem. Thanks
this is an amazing poem and i will check out more of lunaschild8 poetry, this has inspired me to put some of my poems on here, so thank you, upvoted and followed
Nice one, thks for that