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Darkness is the ruler in the heart of them!
With vain faith and shattered mind.
The spirit is willing yet the body is decayed!
They died of knowledge because ignorance was their friend.
The are lost like butterflies hooked in a thorn!
But I'm illuminated.
I use to walk the lowlands but now my paths are elevated!
I eat pain for dinner!
And cried oceans of tears at morning!
The lights are here now, and ending the mourning!
I'm illuminated.
I loved the skies and the beautiful clouds!
But they tore my emotional in just a bout.
They took me through s raging tempest.
And slaughtered me at my weakest
But now!
I'm illuminated.
Roses 🌹 are now red
And I can see my Violet beautiful a rising sunshine. ☀️
Illuminated!
I'm free like the hands of freedom!
There use to be a black Sparrow in my shadows.
But today I shot them victorious arrows.
I use to see nesting crows
But today I see eagles and doves
My favorite line:
"But now!
I'm illuminated.
Roses 🌹 are now red
And I can see my Violet beautiful a rising sunshine. "
Lovely peom, thank you for sharing this with us.
I saw your comment on my recent blog. Thank you for taking the time reading it. I appreciate it =)
UPVOTED ^_-
Keep up the good work and the positive vibe!
Wooooooooooooooooo thank you @purepinay I never thought you'd visit my blog, it's so amazing you did thank you.
I'm glad you like them, you can ask me for a poem anytime I will write you one I'm glad
This sounds really cliché "cried oceans of tears" the metaphors are really tired. The poem itself isn't bad, it just needs to be more original. Try putting more thought into the different metaphors you use.
It's imperfect yes! That's the way I want it to be
I know how much time you put in writing this poem, so thank you for the effort. ^_-
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