That is so cute song. You were talented little kid. :) Did you nurture your talent?
And I got one tip for you; you missed tags here, put first two tags introduceyourself and introducemyself, in that way you will gain greater visibility and more feedback on your post. Also, feel free to repost this if you feel so. Good luck! :)
You're so sweet!!! Thanks @jokster :) I just got approved, so this was a test and I am super happy about the fact that so many people read my poem. Thank you so much! :)
@jokster you're awesome. I will repost it with your awesome feedback!