Thanks, Bran - I use near rhymes more often than not - they're a bit subtle but they play on certain sounds - ex - the Ooh! sound - think Boo! - a natural response to something weird, spooky or mysterious. Hence, the end rhymes of my stanzas, ie. mood, brood, room, you. Most readers may not detect the sound pattern but I think it works on the subconscious level regardless :)
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Oh i caught it. I was more explaining my own personal writing style at that point. You captured the feelings wonderfully with just enough words to make it resonate.
Thank you for taking the time to respond, and if you have some free time, read some of my poetry. Im always interested in others opinions and critiques.