—Tennyson
The cat's asleep
On the chair
And outside
The streets are draped
In white sheets
Until April
When we’ll open
Windows again
And let in fresh air
On my walk
I spot the super moon—
A golden fishbowl
On the horizon
But no one else is out
Probably nursing
A hangover
Of course, no years
Of any kind exist
And what there is
We count from scratching
On cave walls
With a charcoal tip
Assigning names and dates
Where none exist
So, I’m not about
To break out
The bubbly
That’s sitting
in frigid peace
In my garage
For something
That doesn’t exist
Or never did
If I did lift a glass
I’d toast a few friends
Who passed
But wouldn’t
Waste a dime
On a mythical category
Of the mind
That comes
In the darkest season
And mocks
The Age of Reason
You really are talented!
We count from scratching
On cave walls
With a charcoal tip
the imagery makes me sigh. There's nothing I love more than reading something like this and getting that image in my head and that feeling in the pit of my stomach
thanks Lynn - I appreciate the encouragement
you're welcome!
Perfect words from Tennyson to compliment your own.
I’m curious what your thoughts would be on the movie Interstellar - it deals extensively with the relativity of time, and living outside of time as well.
Really? I haven't seen it, but I will :)
Very very awesome words. Its so real as I picture you walking in my mind
thank you, Brian
On my walk
I spot the super moon—
A golden fishbowl
On the horizon
The imageries in this verse is such a beauty!
thanks, Jose
I love the description of the moon as a golden fishbowl--vivid, memorable.
Thanks for sharing your poem.
thanks, Jessica - haven't seen you in a while - a brief hiatus? Good to see you again :)
Yes, it turns out having a baby is a lot of work! But, I’m back :)
Well, congratulations! Best time of your life, despite depleted energy. Maybe steemit will provide an occasional respite from the more tiresome chores :)
It’s true—it’s the best, most rewarding thing I’ve ever done. I can’t even explain the level of love—definitely worth the (many, many, many) sleepless nights.
Happy new year , and nice poetry .
Namaste
thanks, @lalitswami
This is really beautiful!
thanks
The Breath of Life short poetry writtinghttps://steemit.com/poetry/@thinkhappy/the-breath-of-life
thank you
sweet , that's what we call a gift or talent you have really nailed it , i think you can now be able to right your own book.
thanks, @monjan
Very amazing words. Its so genuine as I picture you strolling in my brain...
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This is beautiful, John. And the image you chose is spectacular too. I love reading your poetry!
thank you, lydon - it was a humbug post to offset the forced merriment and the inevitable retrospectives
You're right, John... The calendar is quite an artificial construct...
Useful, nonetheless! Makes me wonder how we'll chart the passing of the ages in The Glory....?
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