New Year’s Night

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)



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Ring out the false, ring in the true.
—Tennyson



The house is quiet tonight,
The cat's asleep
On the chair


And outside
The streets are draped
In white sheets
Until April
When we’ll open
Windows again
And let in fresh air

On my walk
I spot the super moon—
A golden fishbowl
On the horizon

But no one else is out
Probably nursing
A hangover

Of course, no years
Of any kind exist
And what there is
We count from scratching
On cave walls
With a charcoal tip
Assigning names and dates
Where none exist

So, I’m not about
To break out
The bubbly
That’s sitting
in frigid peace
In my garage
For something
That doesn’t exist
Or never did

If I did lift a glass
I’d toast a few friends
Who passed

But wouldn’t
Waste a dime
On a mythical category
Of the mind
That comes
In the darkest season
And mocks
The Age of Reason



© 2017, John J Geddes. All rights reserved



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You really are talented!

We count from scratching
On cave walls
With a charcoal tip

the imagery makes me sigh. There's nothing I love more than reading something like this and getting that image in my head and that feeling in the pit of my stomach

thanks Lynn - I appreciate the encouragement

you're welcome!

Perfect words from Tennyson to compliment your own.

I’m curious what your thoughts would be on the movie Interstellar - it deals extensively with the relativity of time, and living outside of time as well.

Really? I haven't seen it, but I will :)

Very very awesome words. Its so real as I picture you walking in my mind

thank you, Brian

On my walk
I spot the super moon—
A golden fishbowl
On the horizon

The imageries in this verse is such a beauty!

thanks, Jose

I love the description of the moon as a golden fishbowl--vivid, memorable.

Thanks for sharing your poem.

thanks, Jessica - haven't seen you in a while - a brief hiatus? Good to see you again :)

Yes, it turns out having a baby is a lot of work! But, I’m back :)

Well, congratulations! Best time of your life, despite depleted energy. Maybe steemit will provide an occasional respite from the more tiresome chores :)

It’s true—it’s the best, most rewarding thing I’ve ever done. I can’t even explain the level of love—definitely worth the (many, many, many) sleepless nights.

Happy new year , and nice poetry .

Namaste

This is really beautiful!


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sweet , that's what we call a gift or talent you have really nailed it , i think you can now be able to right your own book.

Very amazing words. Its so genuine as I picture you strolling in my brain...
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This is beautiful, John. And the image you chose is spectacular too. I love reading your poetry!

thank you, lydon - it was a humbug post to offset the forced merriment and the inevitable retrospectives

You're right, John... The calendar is quite an artificial construct...

Useful, nonetheless! Makes me wonder how we'll chart the passing of the ages in The Glory....?

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