Haunts me
nights;
But your image
Dies
At first light.
I talk
With you
In dreams,
But static
Clouds
What you mean.
This attraction
charged
By sighs and touches
electrifies
The air
About us.
Girlfriend Electric
Haunts me
nights;
But your image
Dies
At first light.
I talk
With you
In dreams,
But static
Clouds
What you mean.
This attraction
charged
By sighs and touches
electrifies
The air
About us.
Powerful... I like this A Lot!
thanks, @misssiontothemoon
great post upvoted you keep going
Niceeee picture and great ur post word
Good luck @johnjgeddes👍👍👍
thanks, samer
Amazing as usual :-) Resteemed.
thanks, athena
i agree.
This post has received a 6.82 % upvote from @booster thanks to: @johnjgeddes.
@johnjgeddes Thanks for publishing this Charming instant in time for yourself..
Beautiful and dark.
I think this should be continued for about two times longer :) I love it.
thanks @minnowsupports
@johnjgeddes nice poem. upvoted
kindly check my poem thanks
https://steemit.com/poetry/@mrblu/poem-could-this-be-love-i-m-feeling-right-now
thanks
The electrification of the air around two lovers due to the charge between them is probably one of the most poetic and beautiful things out there. You managed to express this love, so alive and so real, perfectly! Well done, and thank you for sharing!
PS: If you are interested and have some spare time, I have some poetry on my blog too. :)
I love everything about this, the lines, the colors, the poetry! Get it boo!!!
thanks for reading @jadae
I am gathering that it's tough trying to get over the loss of her, be it a breakup or perhaps death itself.
I find poem very poignant. And it's great cause you did it so well with few words.
Thanks @johnjgeddes
thanks, @aldentan for your thoughtful response
No worries. Thank you for the art.
Nice!! minimalist poet out there!!
thank you, @louielowa ...micro poetry is challenging
i have new poem also mate hope you read this one https://steemit.com/poetry/@louielowa/we
It's charming and yet sad for some reason. It's very nice @johnjgeddes. :)
It's the Irish in me I'm afraid - a mist clings to me :)
great poem..god job @johnjgeddes ..upvoted this post..
hope you have time to visit my blog and hope you have time to read my poems.. your upvote will highly appreciate..
Thanks, @leslyfay
good poem..
regards
thank you, albert
:O wooooo
thanks for reading:)
Full of sense and meaning in such short phrases.
Keep it up, I' m a fan.
Thank you so much, @mers. Such a kind comment!
Beautiful word art. Solemn yet sprinkled with a dash of hopeful yearning...
Dreamy words and painting! They go together well. Upvoting and following.
Beautifully crafted!
thanks, @awgbibb