that comes down
is rain…
You sense it
As the front moves in
And soon you’re in it
Pelted by everything
The storm can throw at you.
The world tilts
And the weathervanes
Are knocked off kilter.
You curse the gods
And dirty weather
Bear the tremors
And seek shelter.
It’s a cold rain
In November
And unlikely
To get better…
Life has a way
Of weighing you down
Wearing away
Like rain on rock
Until at last
You lie down
And die...
Or, the storm passes
And you get up
To face another crisis.
It’s hard
Trying to endure
And stay sane.
I think I can bear
Any pain...
Except cold November rain.
Very chilling poetry
thanks :)
the coldness of the air is paralyzing me
my thoughts are frozen in ice
the shine of the sun is the only warmth I can feel
my skin react to this november chill
very nice, @ginoseum
Excellent poem. i like and upvoted.
thanks, @succhi
cool, i like ur poet
thanks
Good poetry
thanks
Another one out of the park, John. Thanks.
I'm so glad I kept nagging you for more poetry.... ;)
Now you've got me wondering what poetry in the Glory may be like...
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thanks @creatr - I'm sure it will be in heavenly language :)
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wow nice photography
God will not give the trials of life, beyond the ability of his servant.
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nice poetry and good relationship
The opening lines had me curious, and the poem put into words such a feeling that is difficult to capture in writing. Superb.... :)
thank you, Tina
wow ceativity
thank you
That was absolutely delightful to read.
thanks, @sunscape
thanks, @ainal