Cold November Rain

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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Not everything


that comes down

is rain…


You sense it

As the front moves in

And soon you’re in it

Pelted by everything

The storm can throw at you.


The world tilts

And the weathervanes

Are knocked off kilter.


You curse the gods

And dirty weather

Bear the tremors

And seek shelter.


It’s a cold rain

In November

And unlikely

To get better…


Life has a way

Of weighing you down

Wearing away

Like rain on rock

Until at last

You lie down

And die...


Or, the storm passes

And you get up

To face another crisis.


It’s hard

Trying to endure

And stay sane.


I think I can bear

Any pain...

Except cold November rain.



© 2017, John J Geddes. All rights reserved


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Very chilling poetry

the coldness of the air is paralyzing me
my thoughts are frozen in ice
the shine of the sun is the only warmth I can feel
my skin react to this november chill

Excellent poem. i like and upvoted.

cool, i like ur poet

Another one out of the park, John. Thanks.

I'm so glad I kept nagging you for more poetry.... ;)

Now you've got me wondering what poetry in the Glory may be like...

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thanks @creatr - I'm sure it will be in heavenly language :)

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wow nice photography

God will not give the trials of life, beyond the ability of his servant.
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nice poetry and good relationship

The opening lines had me curious, and the poem put into words such a feeling that is difficult to capture in writing. Superb.... :)

wow ceativity

That was absolutely delightful to read.