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in #poetry • 7 years ago (edited)


Hi @corina, I really like this, and at 63, I can certainly relate.
One 'constructive (I hope) suggestion"
The line that ends :"I that was once"
To me, would flow better, if it
Were I that once was
"catch up with the I that once was."
Just trying to help.
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     7 years ago  

    Thank you for your nice words and for your suggestion. I usually write things the way they flow through my mind so feedback is greatly appreciated.