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RE: Haiku: Heat Wave in South Africa

in #poetry • 8 years ago

And, for fun, to make it a haiku chase...

Woollen cloying haze
how can anybody work
sweating hands tools slip

(I explain a haiku chase in the top of this post: https://steemit.com/haiku/@jenskohler/haiku-chase-based-on-generals-of-napoleon-1-duroc-the-shadow-of-the-emperor-by-herverisson)

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    Sweating hands tools slip
    anxiety consuming
    paralysing fear

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    paralysing fear
    is an impossible task
    rather dance with fear

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      rather dance with fear
      a precipitous knife edge
      amid the thunder

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      amid the thunder
      between lightning's edges keen
      may we step lightly

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        may we step lightly
        into the dawn of the day
        demons undisturbed

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