Thank You. That was honestly my favorite line to write. It changed the tone of the poem to frustration and, as you say, urgency. Thank you for noticing. It always feels good when someone appreciates the effort.
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I'm glad to offer my insight. I'm a firm believer that you get from art what you bring to it. I'm happy that you found my perspective meaningful
BTW, I posted that piece I was talking about, if you want to check it out.