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RE: Poem titled : THE CRY OF AN AFRICAN CHILD

in #poetry6 years ago

"Where lies my hope ?
All tangled on rope"

This is very powerful imagery. I could see tangled groups being a good metaphor for the Hope you're speaking about. The twists and turns you're never sure if you're at the beginning or the end, and there are many knots that need to be untied...

Powerful stuff.
Thank you for opening up and sharing like this.

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I appreciate your effort in going through the poem.Thanks friend @jacuzzi