A POEM ABOUT MONEY! I'M POETIC!

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

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Then the arms around the shoulders are dropped at the sight of Her!
Her presence birthing a distraction amongst men!
All eyes glowing in surprise as she walks in!
The shallowness of the mind!
The beauty of beauties!
The unexpectedness of the expectant!
The narrowness of the line of control!
The redundancy of every occurrence!
The mighty perception of her view!
She strolls into the house making all shut!


She smiles when you hurt!
She laughs when it's not time!
She doesn't know tears!
She doesn't respect nature!
She has variant measures of appearance!
She has variant measures of deceit!
Her absence is a curse on you!
Her presence could also ruin you when not in control!
Words, silence and gestures caress the mind of the expectant!
Beauty symbolised by abundance!


Man-made made a mandate!
Women's action forcasted by her presence!
First time a woman loves a woman!
Sin and righteousness all in need of her!
All religion approve her presence!
No segregation in wants and needs!
Action swings and behavior changes because of her!
The strongest encounter a man could control or not!
Who is she that is so powerful!
She is money! She is wealth! She is powerful!

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This poem is written and composed by me Itoro Archibong with it's central tenet as MONEY.
This poem comprises three stanzas and 10 lines on each stanza.
It doesn't have a specific rhyme pattern.

DESCRIPTION

Money has always been a root to the existence and flow of activities and creations in the world.
As man-made as it is, it has assumed a power that controls every mindset, every statement, every breath and every creation of mankind.
Money is an artificial equipment that governs all the natural and God-made being.

This poem glorifies it's existence and attributes to it the qualities and wild covered domains that money has influenced.

Money is indeed a powerful instrument that has come to implement, influence and determine the activities of mankind and the execution of the inventions of man.

I am Itoro Archibong and I write!

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Very lovely piece dear.
I was confused as to who this woman was at first until i got to the end then i had to read it again.
Nice one👍

Thanks Dear. 😘😘💏

Her love filled my hands as I touched her
My desires will get fulfilled at her feet
She is so royal, kings die to have her
So popular even without an advertisement
All hail her presence and royalhood

Just my addition to the perfect poem by you. Good work.

@bigwaves

Wow that's beautiful!
Good one!
Money is so powerful!

Beautiful piece!
Money could always hear this and come to you.
I pray it does.

Thanks Dear. Amen! 😘😘

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I love your writing style

Thanks my mama!

This is beautiful itoro
Keep writing bae

thanks dear. I really appreciate

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Wow! What a beautiful piece

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