Enough- (I compose this poem off my life journey and things I've witnessed thus far)

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

Water never dries up
Why should life stop being tough?
Stop whining but be tough
Don't give up just say enough
Enough!

Nature never stop crying of being polluted by his own
We are vulnerable, always losing us to casualties of war
Man always destroy not cherish his own
Nature in me is yelling enough
Enough!

Everything built on fallacy
Truth turns conspiracy
We bleed off lies
Blind to every real thing
Enough lies
Enough!

Your nine is my six
Don't think I'm insane
We stand opposite
Our path is different we form an axis
Enough

I journey through the darkest path
Roughest plate
Seen dark faces shine bright
Been all hated now liked
Inherently chose not to be lighted off darkness
Body and soul form oneness
Sticky lines wait for the next
Now seeing good in all bad
I compose sad poems feeling so glad

So glad that I stood up and said enough.
Enough!

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From those I've read, this is the most promising. Well done.

I cannot put myself in your shoes, I cannot share your pain and anger, apart from those you send to me by your writing. Never stop - and never call yourself a poet (many will disagree with me) but, I believe that being a poet is what others name you. It will mean much more to you when they do.

Thank you, I will not call myself a poet ever again thanks for the guide I really appreciate

Tell others that you love poetry and you are doing all you can to become a poet. They'll then, if they like your poems, tell you that you are a poet. lol, I nearly wrote that they will tell you that you are a poem - and I realised, after I stopped myself, that all true poets are poems.

Wow, see how helping helps the helper grow?

Yea... lol