Simple poetry always triumph. I love the fact that it's easy to read and understand.
However, could you explain this: "I want you to hurt, I want you to bleed"
Are you referring to childbirth? (That's in relation to the previous line)
Plus, mind checking me out? I write simple poems too
By children I meant the immature or asshole men that she would go out with. I want her to experience everything and realize that I would give her the world.