The woman you are

in #poetry7 years ago

The Woman you are....
Born for greatness
Survival are your instincts
Beauty is your trademark
Your brains are your pride
Whatever you touch turns to gold
Even the ugliest of lives
Your vision surpasses many a people
Your principles hold you together
You have been the lady of note
Changed my life
I smile for joy
The heart beats for you
For you are a woman of my dreams

I have a lot to say but few words to describe you
You are an inspiration to me
To behold you was a dream
But to be mine has become a reality
I will keep hold of you till time stands still
For, your virtues are for me a crown on my head
You are a flower that does not either
Even planted in a desert you find a way to survive
Your mind is a root that draws water from deep down
For these reasons and more I have made you my queen
You are amazing Honey
With love

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This.....This is just amazing! Looking forward to more deep poetry like this one.

till time stands still..till death do us part, woooow what a latent allusion to the culmination of love, so nice

Hi. Nice writing. Thoroughly enjoyed that. It's good to meet others with similar interests. I'd like you to check out a piece i wrote that touches on some of what you said in this piece. If life to know what you think.

https://steemit.com/introduceyourself/@protius-musicus/woman