what's the problem love?

in #poetry7 years ago



what's the problem love?


my body is walking on air.
my heart is fidgeting.
my pores are gasping for air of life.
my feet are tapping rhythmically.
my brain is in a purple haze.
my lungs are pulsating, full of burnt ash.
the music is entering my system.
the muscles ride on a see-saw, taking turns to bounce.
the skin is clean and smooth, diffusing the air with a tinge of sweetness.
the mind is calm and clear of clutter.
the soul begs for some kind of understanding.

i like you. i do. really.
i enjoy spending time with you.
i like holding your hand.
i like to play with your hair.
i like to fiddle with your flub.
i like staring into your beautiful eyes.
the golden rim, emanating warmth and love.
i like to listen to you speak.
utter those words spiked with good humor.
i like to whisper into your ears,
sharing my intimate thoughts with you only.
i like to stand next to you,
fighting on the same side.
i like the shape of your nose,
and those cherry colored lips.
its movement completes mine.
together we collaborate, creating fireworks.
i'd like to explore you.
i'd like to consume you.
i'd like to devour you.

i'm glad we haven't gone out of control.
love lies in strength, strength is a byproduct of love.
my body is aching with desire.
but before you satisfy my urge, i'd like to talk to you.
sit underneath a lemon tree, and philosophize.
blow heart-shaped smoke, and dance without any inhibition.
i'd like to shine with you,
and embark on an unpredictable journey together.
where our bond and fondness for each other prevail.
we'll hitchhike our way to heaven or hell,
and promote love and peace.

a part of me longs to disseminate,
ready to synthesize with your fibers.
a part of me decides to wait,
and protect the altars of my freedom.
i value independence and individuality.
i'm a ball of solitary force, simultaneously a united force.
because everything is connected in this world.
my connection with you, is a reaction of the collisions of other particles.
the rest of the system intrigues me,
enticing me with an unquenchable curiosity.
i want to discover the world, every single square inch of it.
i don't think it's time for me to settle yet.

this is the age of experimentation.
the age of fusion. the age of consciousness.
the existing hedonistic way of life is on the decline.
i'm expanding my scope, and polishing my perception.
everything becomes sharper.
inspiration tickles us; my fellow intellectuals and i stand up.
tighten our fist, and be prepared to transform.
there's so much left to learn.
so much left to delve into.
so much unknown.

my mentality is radical, i remain myself.
i wish to follow my heart, and melt with you.
and maybe one day, i will root myself on the same pot as you.
and maybe one day, i will find myself waking up next to you.
and maybe on that day, i will finally decide to stay faithful.
to myself. to you. and to us.



image credits to pixabay

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@honeybee compelling imagery!

So nice, u r in love

Not a problem, it's a marvelous feeling even if it crushes u sometimes

@honeybeeso beautiful:-)

Mind blowing! Love is blind but beautiful. If you want to be a good person, you must love someone from heart.

Love is like a rainbow whether it colour seems to show so many types of expression like wise in love we felt so many changes in our body and mind it is very beneficiary to our body n mind if we deserve it

So nice made me smile ....

Oh the power of love...or the illusion of same...

Only time can really test the words of the pen, regarding matters of the heart.

No SP; but, I will resteem.

Thanks for sharing!

Peace!

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waooo great @honeybee, wonderful poetry about love i have ever read. while reading i go into my past and whole memmories run in my mind like a telefilm and feeling fresh with the touch of sadness. great effort i like it much.
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Its nicely done here though your rhythm and imageries are second to none, i love it, wish people can see and love my poem too like yours.
Here it is if you may like and support me too, i will be grateful.

https://steemit.com/poetry/@josediccus/her-sexcellency-a-poem

What a beautiful poem. I can picture it in my mind. So lovely! The flow the description are all so wonderful! This has to be one of the best love poems I have read.

cheers, you have a good repertoire of poets on your feed. I'll follow you to get some of those resteems

Thanks @honeybee, i really appreciate that. Looking forward to read more of your poems & poetry. Keep writing. 😊

his poetry is very good, I like to read it.

Thank you I am following you, I hope you will also follow up vote me this honor to me

I like this part....is a collision of other particles.

nice reading ... enjoyed

Nice lines, resteemed

Great post and very informative. @honeybee Have learnt a lot from it.

Good photo !

@honeybee
i like you. i do. really.
i enjoy spending time with you.

Great Poetry

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Deep eternal love <3 I wish to follow my heart and melt with u , love the quotes in the last paragraph . Beautiful poem all the way , it shoots that feeling of love eternal unbreakable and it's all just so wow and beautiful

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Great post, I will wait for the next one. Nice @honeybee

A ravaging thought that amuses the character's feeling and the mood keeps on changing where it lies silently there to feel its warm feeling, but I felt the character is confuse maybe because he's not faithful to himself?

where the af is my gf i miss her 😢😢😢😭😭

Excellent post, I liked it, I follow you to read what you publish, you pass by my profile, maybe something that interests you too, keep posting like this :D

well done!!@honeybee .i like your poem. it is so lovely..keep steeming & keep writing..👍

You replicate the emotions all over again of
falling in love. Sometimes I find words not enough to describe this surreal feeling. Thank you for capturing.