ice

in #poetry7 years ago

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perfectly constructed ice cubes,
how sentimentally you melt.
the energy surrounds the water,
prickling and bubbling,
on a spectrum of moods.
either positively and happily forming golden ratio,
or negatively and morosely destructing the harmony.

once you've seen the euphoric,
an alternative version of reality,
it's hard to escape the lights.
the madness waiting to explode,
into a constellation of bright planets,
shooting stars, extraordinary luminaries.
strange desires, we've caught a brief sight of what's possible.
we hear them playing the sitar, calling our names.
wading through the frosty air,
on the same wavelength,
drinking the elixir of cupid's secretion.
dream of me tonight, your thoughts merge with mine.
this insanity is driving me towards the brink,
before falling, into the vast glacier bowl.
falling, falling, falling - letting the unknown catch this wreck of a train.
seemingly calm and poised,
and ferociously burning inside;
yearning for a simultaneously dark and mighty force to burn along with...

it's important to follow your philosophy.
don't lose sight.
of the grandeur of our journey here.
we are blessed.
so blessed.
to be alive.
and to be.

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either positively and happily forming golden ratio,
or negatively and morosely destructing the harmony.
eemingly calm and poised,
and ferociously burning inside;
yearning for a simultaneously dark and mighty force to burn along with...

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I love the language of this piece. "once you've seen the euphoric,
an alternative version of reality,
it's hard to escape the lights."

Those are amazing lines. Great write.

loved it.. thanks for sharing

ice loved it.. thanks for sharing

Wow...nice photo

This is the second poem about frozen water I've read on the trending poetry page! This is apparently a trend I should be following. 😃

Awesome photo! Love it!

I've just spent the last 15 minutes or so reading through your beautiful poetry. Thank you. But.... what is a Rhythm Gamer?! :)