SteemitPoetryContest #14 When The Words Came Along

in #poetry7 years ago

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When the words came along
So compelling and so strong
Even if it felt so wrong
I could not resist for long

When poetry asks me for a dance
Just like any other art
Sometimes I get it all at once
Sometimes a glympse, sometimes a start

Then it gets better the more I edit
It's not that I'm seeking any credit
I only seek credit for my choices
And I didn't choose to write those voices.

This was My entry for @terrycraft 's 14th poetry contest.
Good luck to everyone.

I took this photo yesterday with my Sumsung Galaxy J2 in the magical city of Djerba, Tunisia.
Arabic is my native language, but I still didn't figure out what those words mean. I guess I'll have to do some research and learn how to read it. Mybe I'll post about this puzzle again when I solve it.

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all the best for you

Thank you @nourtawfiq
any help with the puzzle would be apreciated ;)

Wonderful poem, I like the last verse especially - very clever to integrate the writing process into the poem itself. Good luck with the competition.
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Thank you @c0ff33a yeah it started to get very nice in the end but the contest rules dont allow more verses :(
I guess I'll finish it later :D
(sorry @terrycraft I hope you can act like you didn't see this comment lol)

That’s a cool bit of art on the wall great poetry as always

Thank you @tattoodjay
You are very supportive ^_^

Most welcome I try to visit and support as many as I can where i enjoy their posts such as yours :)

that makes you a great ally ;)

Well we are building up a great community many like me in the alliance ;)

I love this poem 💗 the part about "when poetry takes me for a dance" really spoke to me! Almost as if I could envision your writing taking you out dancing on the town!

at that moment the beating stops
the heart tries to leave the chest
even if I forgot the steps
it's not an option to resist
..
God ! it should've been much longer than this 😃

Very nice poem man. Lovely way of presenting :) your creative process. Thank you for your contribution and participation to our community. God Bless You. Peace and Love. Keep on Writing.


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The poet carries the poetry in the heart and makes the mind put seasoning

El poeta lleva la poesía en el corazón y hace que la mente ponga sazón

that is so ... true
<3

Solid poem :) Beautiful photo as well! Hope you find out what it means.. I went to high school in the UAE for a few years and I fell in love with the Arabic language! Especially the writing.. I can read some of the words on the photo but I don't know what they mean either, hope you post an update! Following!

Thank you @barkeybark
it wont be easy but I'll try to solve it

I only seek credit for my choices
And I didn't choose to write those voices.

That's a nice ending. It does show how enslaved us writers may be to these voices.

yeah sometimes we are
so we'd better get used t it and start enjoying it ;)