Poetry : The park ( 정원 )

in #poetry • 7 years ago

untitled-1-264a00aee1528cd9058d0c00353cbf26.jpg

# The Park

The park has both of us
Not wide, but small
one is not an obstacle in it
That's enough for both of us
Garden flowers are not colored
grassland is not a rug
but very smooth time footed feet
for us open obstacles
because..
in the park have two
You beetle, I'm a beetle
I'm flower, you flower
small, solar full of our garden
a place to take away from the world and nusia

정원

공원에는 우리 둘다있다.
넓지는 않지만 작다.
하나는 그것에 장애물이 아니다.
우리 둘다에겐 충분합니다.
정원 꽃은 색깔이 없다.
초원은 양탄자가 아니다.
그러나 매우 부드러운 시간 발 받침대
우리에게 열려있는 장애물
때문에..
공원에는 2 명이있다.
딱정벌레, 나는 딱정벌레 야.
나는 꽃, 너는 꽃이야.
작고 태양이 우리 정원의 전체
세상과 누사로부터 빼앗을 곳

download (6).jpg

Regard @haryanis

#writing #education #kr #busy
7 years ago in #poetry by
$0.00
    3 votes
    Reply 3
    Sort:  
  • Trending
    • [-]
     7 years ago  

    Woff, woff!

    Hello @haryanis, Nice to meet you!

    I'm a guide dog living in KR community. I can see that you want to contribute to KR community and communicate with other Korean Steemians. I really appreciate it and I'd be more than happy to help.

    KR tag is used mainly by Koreans, but we give warm welcome to anyone who wish to use it. I'm here to give you some advice so that your post can be viewed by many more Koreans. I'm a guide dog after all and that's what I do!

    Tips:

    • If you're not comfortable to write in Korean, I highly recommend you write your post in English rather than using Google Translate.
      Unfortunately, Google Translate is terrible at translating English into Korean. You may think you wrote in perfect Korean, but what KR Steemians read is gibberish. Sorry, even Koreans can't understand your post written in Google-Translated Korean.
    • So, here's what might happen afterward. Your Google-Translated post might be mistaken as a spam so that whales could downvote your post. Yikes! I hope that wouldn't happen to you.
    • If your post is not relevant to Korea, not even vaguely, but you still use KR tag, Whales could think it as a spam and downvote your post. Double yikes!
    • If your post is somebody else's work(that is, plagiarism), then you'll definitely get downvotes.
    • If you keep abusing tags, you may be considered as a spammer. It may result to put you into the blacklist. Oops!

    I sincerely hope that you enjoy Steemit without getting downvotes. Because Steemit is a wonderful place. See? Korean Steemians are kind enough to raise a guide dog(that's me) to help you!

    Woff, woff! 🐶

    $0.22
    • Past Payouts $0.22
    • - Author $0.22
    • - Curators $0.00
    1 vote
    Reply
    [-]
     7 years ago  

    Thanks for the suggestion, maybe in the future I will use english, let it easy to understand by everyone and also korea

    $0.00
      Reply