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RE: Come Revolution (An Original Poem)

in #poetry6 years ago

I love it.

The first stanza was talking about Life.
2nd ,, the reality of life and new world order government over us. The political people at large.
3rd ,, the misery and mystery of life.
4th ,, the Trinity of Unity, Love and peace brings a divine environment.
I'll stop there, I don't want to review all. But the last stanza is a message of hope the whole needs, the exact right words that can put things right.

It’s not too late,
our fate still bends,
come hither quickly,
or this story ends.

It's not too late to make amend concerning this world.

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Thank you @grandiosae! That's a really good analysis.