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RE: The Ring

in #poetry7 years ago

So many segments that are "core" to this piece, but I do always try to make the landing stick more than the others.

And the "within" here, hmmm. Within the palm, within the speaker. I too felt this in my bones, and to some degree, much of the theme of the piece was constructed to lead to that very finale.