Violance cannot make us rise
neither can faking and lies
But being honest, fair and wise!
Only now I realise
I just love this bit. Congratulations for your great talent!
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Violance cannot make us rise
neither can faking and lies
But being honest, fair and wise!
Only now I realise
I just love this bit. Congratulations for your great talent!
thanks alot
I noticed that everyone likes the last parts ( the positive message) and not the sad one ;)
I'll keep this in consideration for my next poem :)