Nice work! I love the unexpected line breaks and the way all the lines are scrunched up together and overlapping. It really adds to the message of the poem. I'm sure that original street artist would be happy to know his work inspired a poem. Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you @erb! I can't wait to play around with this technique a little more. It's perfect for this age of distraction we live in. It really does force you to pay attention. I'm glad you enjoyed it!