Early you leave, to another’s arms,
and early I miss your first flames,
that warmth of once, of time before,
when I was still new, and unfamiliar
still to be discovered, to be known,
and you’d come early into my flames,
and I’d take you in, to my warmth,
here on a bed never defiled by I,
even though defiled, you return to it,
do you even remember I of old?
I of your youth, of your energy,
I of your first kiss, your first?
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I am glad you find it lovely, @mnaeemkhokhar.
And thanks for reading and sharing how you feel about it.
Now i am in debt to you, to write more 'lovely' ones,
and you are in debt to always share your thoughts about it with me...Hahha.
Thanks mate. Glad to have your acquaintance.
Is this really an impromptu writing? Well done, dude. I wish I write as fast and as good as you. Haha.
It is, @epicdominic.
Just to write my thoughts as they come at that time. Such is the freedom poetry allows.
Thanks for the compliments, for commenting. You honor me.
A heart broken wife!! Some good work.
The pleasure is mine, mate. Thanks