Late at night I went outside
No one to see, No one that eyed
It were as if
The noise had died
And someplace deep inside
I softly cried
With Darkness on my side
Shackles of constraint untied
Me and my thoughts at last, allied
My vision became weaker
Less and less were I to see
Yet my horizon came to be
It showed me the way
What I were to do this day
As the weight came to fade away
Piece of mind, Piece of heart
All this time were set apart
Listened to all but myself
Time be finally here
To disappear
And become what I
In truth endear
Piece of mind, Piece of heart
All this time were set apart
Listened to all but myself
NICE POETRY
ty :)
creative poetry my friend :) i made this for you :) a little gift for you : )
That's pretty cool :D Ty!
your welcome :)
I too find that darkness has a big part to play in poetry something about pondering on th the dark makes for good poetry.
Thanks friend I enjoyed :]
:) I am a big fan of the darkness ^.^
Me too it keeps showing up hehe
good one
O my friend! You are so talented! Thanks for a piece of heart! πππππ€
thanks :) :)
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:)
good poem
Hard to say if ending is sad or happy. I'm torn.
aww :)
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Nice poem! You're a talented Writer.
Thank you, and thank you for checking out my posts :)
Magical you are! Beautiful.
Wow omg this is a great poem <3 I love the last sentence especially "time be finally here- to become in truth what I endear" and the rhyming of each sentence each paragraph truly beautiful . :-) keep it up!
Thanks ;)
Very nice reflection @droucil I enjoyed your poem
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