Happiness has triggered new moments of lightening words, beauty in the smile of the new day brings new changes. We begin to discover the site of wonderful talents, we go to the magical places of sleepy dreams - Your intentions raise the walls of my passion.
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Source - pinterest.com/pin/307300374567697587/The sun is turning new desires into tunnels of enthusiasm, the wind pushes snow kisses through the perfect beauty of energy. Where is love when sadness presses the heart, where is happiness when there is no exit from the eternal problem - knowledge is the key that opens success in all directions of paradise enjoyment.
We remain the beauty of the perfect choice until decisions are made on imperfect days. We are free souls who repeat the way of their mistakes, the only pure love gives true freedom - Hug me, kiss my heart, and lift up my spirti to do the impossible things.
In this world of perfect mistakes we pass by the cells of life in the walking dream, only love leaves the lasting consequences of enjoyment and eternal happiness in the heart of the universe - You need me now, tomorrow and always my love.
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- Original poetry written by @dobartim
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Hear touching line. sometimes in life we face a very heart breaking situations but if we are positive from inside we can deal it fairly. Dreams are very important to grow up.
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I loved the last passage!
Is just beautiful.
Don't know if you are familiar with Slavoj Žižek' philosophy. But in one of his many interviews he had a beautiful insight of love and beauty... to cut the long story short > The beauty of imperfections. That we all crave that missing detail of something but that's why we also love it. :)
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So nice to come across a fellow poet up here! Upvoted and followed! Good job 🤠
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All of the above poetry touched my heart, the words are fascinating, I just simply loved your work, well among all of them I loved to read this one most,
In this world of perfect mistakes we pass by the cells of life in the walking dream, only love leaves the lasting consequences of enjoyment and eternal happiness in the heart of the universe - You need me now, tomorrow and always my love.
Keep sharing such posts, thankyou
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That's beautiful. Love is the ultimate goal of all existence for me. It is our main source and it is where it will all go when it's all over. May our journey be peaceful, but above it all, may our journey be full of love.
God bless you
What a wonderful piece. It gives me great pleasure reading your poetry, it really is an expression of inner emotions and your images speak with so much volume too. Well done sir.
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The moon and stars are reluctant to shine at night,
morning sun no fragrant flowers
daytime thirst for sun exposure
twilight sorepun shame illuminates the earth
when the longing approaches
no birds sing
semerdu symphony
Tired footsteps
following the strains of the harmony poem
imagined the soul sliced lonely
welcomed the blushing body
when your face is present in the dream
penetrating into hallucinations
damaging the walls of emotion
poetry is very beautiful @dobartim
Make one poetry
what poem I make @dobartim
Amazing, your poetry is a soothing fluid for the soul. You communicate directly to one’s soul. Hmmm where’s the love truly when sorrow looms over one’s heart? Where’s encouragement in the midst of discouragement, where’s victory when the victors are now slaves to their own incompetence. Love conquers everything they say, but when Love is lost what’s the solution. We need each other to grow, we need each other for knowledge and together we’d succeed in life. Success to all
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You killed it again with this wordings. Keep on inspiring me and many others. Thanks
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This poerty very nice.
I appreciate you writing... thanks for sharing this post.
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Wow this is poetry very nice,I remembered my past after reading this poetry. good job
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Your post are very lovely
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Nice poetry sir. Upvoted
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Happiness is what we all need and the body needs it too to push ahead. Another good one from you
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great poetry @dobartim you will become a poet as long as you improve your poetry. best of luck
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"...love is all that matters, all there is and all we need"
Truly yours,
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Another great post..!!
Thanks for sharing :)
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fantastic & impressed!
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phenomenal & charming!
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Well articulated, i enjoyed every bit of this poem.
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Beautiful poem to start my day... Good morning sir!
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Beautiful piece of poetry.
Life is full of imperfections, yet we need one another to turn them into perfections.
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You welcome sir.
nice post
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It was such a deep and emotional poem. You can actually make it into a lyrics and make a song. nice post you got my upvote and follow.
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great post sir i relly appreciate you.and poetry
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Hi nice poetry and the photos are amazing
@dobartim Excellent poetry! What's more, your choice of pictures particularly the live picture after the first verse is perfect and pure genius! Loved every piece of your write up...keep pouring it in. Poetry is life, life is poetry!
WOW. This is BEAUTIFUL. Specially, This line touched my heart- "Hug me, kiss my heart and lift up my spirit to do the impossible things" 🙏
This is very inspiring. I recently started writing and I think this is quite brilliant. I would love for you to help me with my writings so I can get better. I am following you:).
The first piece of art really spoke to me. Kinda how I have been feeling lately..
This is steamy!! Nice. Joy
Interesting! I just upvoted and resteemed this.