Wake Up

in #poetry7 years ago
  • The morning smells of pure power, desire wins the peace in the silence of the sun. We sleep for days as we pass through the markets of life, our eyes only look at big things while we lose their essence. Consciousness is practicing nonsense in the fitness room.

  • The flowers cover the weakness of the mind, the fields spread the truth about cosmic reality. We leave the comfort zone through the touch of a star, my love sits beside me in the morning sky of love. Stop the sadness with a smile of rose, lift the energy of freedom to a higher level of spirit.

  • Inspiration falls into the waterfall of thought, we create new music with heart drum. Balloons transmit messages over the oasis and the desert of happiness, the rivers pass under the legs while we clean past mistakes. This morning is the blessing of your gentleness, you woke me up with a hot kiss.

  • Your poems create advice from the universal energy of knowledge, you are a creation of perfection that breaks the illusion of passage. I see your traces in the love of my life, I play the game of passion in the material universe as I race for true love.


Original poetry written by @dobartim
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Good morning sir, it is so great to read such beautiful words in the morning. You make poetry look so beautiful with your wise words and the knowledge.
I see positivity in you always.
Win win only Together

"Your poems create advice from the universal energy of knowledge" That's how your poems are,they create advice from the universal energy of knowledge and that is why i look forward to them
Awesome poetry.

Thank you very much our @queenerica

It’s always good waking up every morning and see this beautiful write ups! It’s always gives joy and keep doing what you doing.... the world is looking up to you. Wishing you happy Good Friday!

Have a nice and successful day

Very nice

Thanks, I don't see you on our online class

Just here to show my love for your poetry. Upvoted!

Thank you

@dobartim I hope everyone live their lifestyle according to this written poetry. This is very nice

Welcome to Steemit, be part of Steem Schools

Thanks... I will be looking forward to learn more from you boss

I like this structure of post. Will know about the poem who writed with love. Nice post Mr. @dobartim

Thank you very much, have a nice and successful day

Beautiful poetry......
You are gifted @dobartim

Thanks, see you on the top

I do not know what to comment on ... the greatness and magnificence of these wonderful words or the greatness of the sensation or the accuracy of the choice of pictures ... You've taken a great picture of the good morning
Thank you so much for this wonderful feeling and I hope you like it

Hard work with vision

good work..

Morning with such amazing poetry, it looks like you are a great poet haha.
Thanks a lot for your wise words.
We win together.

See you on the top

It was very good to read the whole writing, every line was touched. Poetry emerges very beautiful in the morning.Thanks so much for sharing a good write up,

I love to wake up early and wake up early in the morning.,,,,

Welcome to Steemit, see you on Steem Schools

thank you, I'm new to Steamet. There is a desire to learn and do something good.

Nice poem and photo. My favorite line of this poem is "inspiration falls into the waterfall of thought"

Thank you very much, see you on the top

You're fidele to your style as always @dobartim, it describes you as a man who is true to himself, who doesn't wear masks.. I aprecciate this quality of yours.

Every time I read your poetry, I'm getting more and more sure that you travel to another dimension to date your Muse )

Spiritual love above everything

It's a soothing feeling waking up to this good poem. Another one you got 😊

Thank you very much

Long time ago I used to write poems how I wish I met steemit 23 years ago. I am very much inspired.. How I wish I could write poems again as good as your sir.

awesome post...