Through The Freedom Filter

in #poetry7 years ago
  • Attack me with the kiss of the summer night, conquer me through the free thoughts of the wise saints. The sky cried as we sat on the sunny side of the coast, the power came with the fire of unknown knowledge. We feel the pressure of challenges, the new future wins the old habits of materialism.

  • We opened our minds to new parachutes, we see big balloons flying on the heads of creative people. The moon has created a new garden for our ideas, we have become creators of limited limitlessness. We stayed behind the curtain of wonder, we woke up in the magical digital age.

  • The sounds break down barriers of chains that take off our air, we lose reason on for details that bring us results. You gave me the enthusiasm of the source of change, you gave me your hands with diamonds of wisdom. We run through the storms and rejoice in our mistakes that become perfect teachers.

  • Feel the power of the wind on the shoulders of passion, feel the power of the spirit that makes us unique in the mystical universe. I like your behavior with a smile of a butterfly, you have won my energy of love. We follow the connection of ether with faith in our potential.


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From being free , we evolve into freedom
Feeling so free like the bed of the sky
The winds caressing our faces in the rain
And the rain forming little pools by our feet

The chain is broken and the cackles removed
I’m a free man but lock my up in your heart
The air is warm and the birds are singing freedom
The night is cold and with you there’s warmt

Thanks for the daily inspiration my friend . Good morning

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Exactly! Mistakes are the best teachers in life. Mistakes come when we do or take wrong things/decisions. It is supposed to give us experience of that thing so it does not repeat itself.
Great piece friend.
We win together

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The poetry talks about power of innovation and outside-the-box creativity.

We opened our minds to new parachutes, we see big balloons flying on the heads of creative people. The moon has created a new garden for our ideas, we have become creators of limited limitlessness.

Powerful words. Nice poetry

Thank you for the invitation, but am a student already at Steems School Community Sir. You invited me sometime ago and i joined and it has been amazingly helpful to me.

Wow I was waiting for this.
Beautiful poetry sir @dobartim.
It is true that we should learn from the mistakes we did in past. Mistakes should not stop us but should make is wiser for the next time.

Thanks a lot for sharing this with us.
We win only Together
Steemschools forever

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lovely poetry ; wonderful words

Thank you very much

Very nice your post friend,the amazing,i like,good job my friend,@dobartim

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Words on marble. Poetry at it best @dobartim

Thank you very much, see you in business class https://discord.gg/q9VEn5n

Oh! I love this.
My soul is lifted.
Thanks for this.

Welcome to Steemit, Be part of Steem Schools and learn https://discord.gg/q9VEn5n

Thank you.
I appreciate.

@dobartim i give this poetry caption "beautiful word".

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And this is the more reason why I enjoy reading poetry of great minds of writers, such as you. your poetry is inspirational and it has passed a clear message across.

"we have become creators of limited limitlessness" --> very strong sentence. makes me think about a lot that is going on in my life... awesome text!

Thank you for nice comment

The universe has given humanity great strength but it is a real life to keep on changing,
the light of victory is only in people who want to keep creating change
make it something that can be enjoyed and be a role model for everyone



with @dobartim we become winners

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