The Gods Were Dancing

in #poetry7 years ago
  • The rain fell on your golden hair, the desire came through the sunny valleys of our minds. We see distant stars of our closeness, you traveled in the minds of heavenly creatures. We dream of different dreams about the same principles of life - you are the truth of the magic words.

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  • The Gods have come down to the Olympic path of our forgotten reality, we dance according to their rules while we put chains around our eyes. We see new horizons of plastic joy as love flows through our hands - times have changed to a greater level of illusion.

  • We fly on the clouds of colorful promises as they pass the barrier of material reality, the power of emotions raises the mountains to the pedestal gravity of the blind imagination. Gods dance in the tactical rhythm of our passing - the theater sells expensive cards to those who are finally coming to the show.

  • Our love smelled of the eternal moment of happiness, we have merged the past in the future abundance of gentle embraces. I look forward to your touch while waves bring new joy to our eternal love.


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So inspiring and captivating.love the word construct

such a fantastic lines .hit my heart

Such a awesome post good job carry on dear @dobartim

You don't cease to inspire me with your poems. This is another classic. Now to my next inspiration

Its touching my heart . like bom bom bom .
Such a good lines .

Nice guy

Waoh, I go to your blog everytime because I know I will always find something very spectacular.... I love this lines i look forward to your touch when waves bring joy to our eternal love. I read it over and over again.... You're good

That was an exceptional poetic masterpiece and artistic design. I agree with you on this ;

Our love smelled of the eternal moment of happiness, we have merged the past in the future abundance of gentle embraces.

Wonderful brother thank you

originality

Ths is really nice @dobartim. You are so talented with poetry. Do you mind dedicating it to someone?😁🙈

i like this like alwasys nice post

The way you play with words @dobartim is beyond me!
I could only wish i had quarter of your skill.
This is beautiful peotry... Thanks for putting this out!

could be wiccan poem :-) +1 :-)

the power of emotions raises the mountains to the pedestal gravity of the blind imagination

This really spoke to me man, thanks. :D

Its really beautiful poetry and wonderful photo you sharing for us, thanks

Highly captivating... a great one

How I wish to be a good writer also. I want to inspire my students through writing but sad to say i am not good in writing. Keep it up@dobartim!

Captivating title and mind blowing poem,,, i learn a lot from your poems

Moment follows other moments, life will go on without us. Beautiful paragraphs and thanks for sharing.

Wow, your poetic write up is truly inspiring

Great post @dobartim ! Nice work, i upvoted. I am interested in the esoteric. If you are interested in this topic, I have similar material about mantras - https://steemit.com/esoterics/@adeptus/all-about-the-tibetan-mantras
Perfect for meditation.