Looking through the clouds on the consciousness of our imagination, you pass through the thoughtful configurations of the star. The rain covered your face with the blossoms of love - I remained at the level of passion in your touch, a knight's sword hangs over my words.
Source - ryky.deviantart.com/art/Emotions-602840816The beach shone in your eyes, the magic of the real world has pierced me with your beauty from a real fairy tale. Life has become a casino while we enjoy the waves of the wind, you swing with your lips an ice drink while your legs dance with the table of nature.
Knowledge recognized happiness through the wise words of cave mice, we are drowning in the infinite repetition of the same actions and you are laughing at our nonsense in gentle passion. We are voting for smart fools as we strive for night kisses.
You are my love in rhythm, music and dancing of the most beautiful heights, I absorb the steps of our memories through the sun's paradise of your eyes. We fly ships of pleasure through time tunnels of more dimensions, I fell in love with your passion.
Turn a new path of love, truth and honor in a world where truth leaders are needed, you are my blessing and an example of the power mind that flies on the wings of your knowledge. You are the beauty that forever remains on the pedestal of happiness.
Source - weheartit.com/entry/231378511
- Original poetry written by @dobartim
You are putting words together that shake the English language.
Well said. All steemians find peace reading your words.
Thank you my friend
"knowledge recognized happiness". I'm taking this with me. Thanks for this breakfast
You are welcome
Nice poetry
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your poetry is amazing as usual. The picture of reality that you created with words of imagination it is simply outstanding. The fluency and flow in your poetry is awesome @dobartim I guess I need to learn this from you. Thanks for sharing @dobartim
Thank you my friend
you are welcome
You must love somebody a lot
lovely! resteemed
Awesome!!
I love your style. Your words struck a cord in me. Your words speak to the soul.
Welcome to Steemit
Thank you.
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I was amazed..wow!
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Truly esoteric and original in form.
Well compiled and thought out make up.
Thanks
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Love truly has taken control of your pen, yet another beautiful poem focusing on the deep feeling that comes from love and transcends reasoning. Thanx for blessing me.
Ps: you didn't acknowledge my entry for the yoga pose https://steemit.com/yoga/@dobartim/59ahix-competition-for-the-best-yoga-move-the-prize-is-30-sbd-7-days-day-4-the-registration-is-in-progress#@belemo/re-dobartim-59ahix-competition-for-the-best-yoga-move-the-prize-is-30-sbd-7-days-day-4-the-registration-is-in-progress-20180207t212437608z as well as my article for the steemit ultimate writing challenge https://steemit.com/steemitultimatechallenge/@belemo/steemit-ultimate-challenge-8-weeks
I will see
Nice poem @dobartim..
Felt the emotion
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nice post my brother.
Wow, am lost for words, this is very good writing. Hope to see more poetry coming from you.
Wel organized, each paragraph to the next, I was hypnoticed. Amazing @dobartim
good post. I already thought about it.
Well done xx
Well done!
I remember a Supernatural in the image. When Dean got pulled out by the angels from hell. Then the imprint. :)
Yeah
excellent, I hope that the person that inspired you readed it, it is beautiful poem.
Thank you
Poema muy profundo. Felicidades.
You write really good. Please check out my post, thanks 😄
Yes, he really writes well. But I think I'll assist him in checking out your posts, lol
Your creativity and writing skills is coveted as it have its way of carrying the mind along and piercing it through, I've got to put up something as a proof of learning from you, expect it soon
Thank you very much
You're welcome as always
I just followed you, kindly follow back.