We are looking for ourselves in a lost empire, we are wandering in the valleys of scientific achievements. We have an inevitable future between love and wars, our paths come through the mirror of change. We have come a long way in the material direction, we see the truth with the limited senses of passion and ignorance.
We stand with the hope that remains deep in the dream world, the ideals become wet as rain after the sun. Promises and empty floscules are given, flamboyant impulses pass through the surface of the brain. We have become an ego dust that flies in the air, love has disappeared in the game of childish joy.
Ideas drive the imagination while the illusion demands new excuse for its victories. We feel enthusiastic in the digital world of success, money has become a false substitute for true love. New waves come with diamonds of lust, greed has become the requisite goods.
On your shoulders I see lightning and the light of love virtue, you are the only truth that springs from the body of the universe. The mystery has become the logic of the lost time, you are the ideal we are looking for in our habits. We break boundaries with spiritual messages, love is the main power of the universe and people.
Original poetry written by @dobartim
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Nice poetry. Keep it up
Thanks
Beautiful lines. Heart touching.
Thanks a lot
Hello my dear friend! Today is a big holiday in Ukraine - Palm Sunday! It is said that something can be wished on this day and it will surely come to fruition! So today, I want to wish you happiness, health and harmony to you and your family! I wish you creative success and never stop at the achievement! I believe that my wishes will be fulfilled for you! Who is such a happy person? Happy people call those who know what they want and aspires to achieve their goals. Who is planning to implement the most cherished dreams and not afraid of difficulties. I think you can be called happy - let this happiness not leave you all your life, let your dreams come true one after another, let it bring joy! Your friends are always close to you, your relatives are ready to help at any moment - let it always be!
Happy Holidays, thank you for this awesome comment.
its a true, about greed and about money that "become a false substitute for true love". its a shame cause the society only thinks in the material stuffs, but LOVE its the master key, and like an espiritual human beings we try to teach others to use the power of love, the same conection that share us in the middle of our heart and soul, like a big universal brotherhood. its possible when some guides leaders to others for evolution, we need to learn about the ancestral wisdom of antiques sorcererss: the natural elements, the river shows us to being strong in a one way to sucess (with the power of love), the air give the breath to being gratefull with the life, the fire give us the power of the soul, the power for do all the things make´s possible and the earth its our mother, we need to respect and give a lot of love and care cause its sacred. bleesings my friend, namaste ;) and ahó! salut from Caracas, Venezuela, from SouthAmerican magic lands, near to amazonian forest ;)
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hi master! :D im in this awesome dischord project, in fact im very glad and happy to being a part of this one, im waiting for the SteemSchool latino soon, for colaborate 100%, cause im spanish speaker and writer. i try to do my best with the english, i don´t use google translator or other´s translator at all for write english, i was learn every word cause the music, the english songs and stuffs like that. :) in fact i dont know if you read my steemit-ultimate-challenge-8-weeks-week #6 post :) but i write all in english and was a very challenge for me to write entire article in english, i speak about my charity foundation and my mod channel with YAH, and other´s stuffs like my art and i share my links, i speak a little bit of my life too (im a motivational writer) and of course i invite some people to Steem School project, i found very awesome room, itsmeachille , karen chen (karensue), queenerica and desmonddesk very gently, awesome and amazing people, i was very happy to speak and chat with each one, and they check some of my links, and music :D i was very happy about that. blessings and take care
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Good post boos... so nice👌
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Soul poetry indeed,at first when i was reading the first 3 standards it didn't sound so happy,i like the change of tune at the last stanzas all of it
Awesome poetry 👌👏
Exactly, where is a secret word?
I don't know lol...where is it?
Yesterday class
LOVE is the key word of all times! It's just people nowadays are not eble to love anymore, they have to learn again how to do it. How can we learn? We should look inside ourselves and feel The Love! And just after this we will be able to share it with people.
Love is everything
Oh well i was going to say love but thanks @liverussian and you sir @dobartim
Good morning sir.
Once again a morning with your poetry, I come here every morning to feel relaxed and see the beautiful work of poetry by you
I loved these lines. We believe in you and I know that you believe in us too.
We win only Together
Good morning, have a nice and successful day
Your fascinating word in poetry has really touched my soul. Thank you @dobartim for sharing this worthy poem with us.
You are always welcome
Thank you @dobartim for your response.
You are welcome
That was great. It really awesome
Thank you very much
very good poetry @dobartim, most of us see now that poetry is usually very inspiring, thanks for sharing
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yes @dobartim, thanks for those who have given me to join in Steem Schools
@dobartim... Your words are always awesome.... Your poetry are very unique and inspiring
Welcome to Steem Schools
I like the lyrics....welldone
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In this ephemeral works, our thoughts are clouded.
By the seemingly little enjoyments of today.
At the grave cost of what the future holds.
We turn deaf ears to the wailings of tomorrow.
Nonetheless, destiny would take its course.
Very nice work of art
Thank you very much for this nice words
You're welcome.
Most times I wonder how these words flow through your mind. I find it difficult sometimes to comprehend what you write. It requires deep thinking to understand. I do poems sometimes but I'm not consistent like you. I'm not a scholar of letters but I love poems. You can check out my blog to read my laSt poem: https://steemit.com/poetry/@adisrivastav/everything-is-going-to-be-left-behind
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hmm amazing.. We want money to get calmness and peace of mind.. but we can get it only by giving and getting love.. So money can't be a substitute of love..
Everything is love
Love and compassion are present without being realized, a beautiful word is only a view that can change the life of man himself. Things that are not able to be thought of by man, only on the creator of the Universe that is able to reach it.
life is just a part of a journey that will come for us to come back to him.
something good will bring a tremendous impact later on
See you on the top
Wow the sunset it's so very beautiful I love your post because it so very nice........
Thank you very much
Bella poesia amigo poeta @dobartin, hay demasiada codicia en el mundo, las fotos son preciosas en todas sus poesias, mucho cariño y un fuerte abrazo.